Euse
Posts : 204 Join date : 2014-02-01 Age : 25
| Subject: Belladonna, the Enslaved Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:27 pm | |
| Name: Lilith "Belladonna" Noir Gender: Female Appearance: Belladonna is a woman who stands 5'5" tall, at least when she's on the ground. She is usually levitating slightly above the ground, her slender body held in a slightly taunting pose, her hands holding a large, black scythe the drags upon the ground and appears to be nothing but a shadow made solid by a long, glowing string of the most scarlet red winding up the hilt. Her dark brown hair falls in tendrils down to her shoulder blades, wisps of glowing red appearing in the bangs that fall straight across her forehead and the tips that fall upon her back. Her pale, heart-shaped face is home to many freckles and a pair of big, dark eyes. As in terms of wardrobe, she wears a black, legless one-piece over a pair of red leggings and thigh high black boots tied with red strings up the side. A black corset tied with glowing red strings envelopes her stomach. At her waist sits a red sash that acts as a skirt in the back, reaching down to her knees and increasingly becoming a violet color. Upon the back of the sash rests a sort of clock design in black ink. Her arms have glowing red slits upon them. Title: The Enslaved Age: Appears to be in her early twenties Bio: Lilith grew up in a small village free of the restraints of war. At a time, she knew nothing but peace and love. Yet, as all stories go, she grew up far before her time. When she was a child, her village was overtaken by a group of men clad in black cloaks and wielding books of death magic. They slew all the adults and brought the young to a gloomy, shadowy, and beautiful island. The dark men took one child a day, and they never returned back to the prison-like leanto the other children were residing in. All they heard were quiet screams, the hissing of fire, and the monotone chants of men. Along came the day Lilith was brought from shelter to a clearing and a stone altar by the men in black. They tied her down, cut her skin and poured poison down her throat as they chanted their words over and over. Life faded from poor Lilith. Death was but the beginning of her life. She awoke in the darkness of night, surprised to see she was still upon the stone altar. The ropes lay around her, snapped. The cultists lay around her upon the ground in pools of blood. She looked at her hands and arms, only to see all of the injuries inflicted upon her by the cloaked figures were healed, glowing red and emitting a sort of heat that made her face flush. She looked up, seeing a lone face in the treeline shaded with wrinkles. He smiled at her and held out his hand. A beautiful belladonna bloom sat upon it, for her and her "efforts." She rose to take it and found that her feet did not touch the ground. As she panicked midair, he explained to her how they had placed a grim spirit within her, and how she was to grow to be a new goddess to a world of weak fools. He explained how the other children had been "taken care of" since there was no more need of them. It was then that Lilith lost control of her body in anger and sadness. A scythe materialized in her fingertips, and found its way into the forehead of the old man. Defense Rating: 4 Magic Damage Rating: 7 Physical Damage Rating: 5 Health: 687Damage: 92Damage Reductions(Magic/Physical): 57/55 Champion Types: Fighter // Mage Abilties:- Passive:
Effects: If Belladonna falls beneath 20% health, her shade form is instantly activated, but only for a short time. Cooldown: Once every Eight Posts - Ability One:
Effects: (Enemy) Damage upon attachment, 1/2 damage upon break; allows Belladonna to pull the enemy to her, attached enemy takes increased damage (2x) from her for Two Turns, silences enemy once pulled for one turn [Shade: damage over time for as long they are attached] (Ally) Shield ally [Shade: improved shield]; allows Belladonna to pull herself to the ally Appearance: Two red strings fire from Belladonna's left arm, while two red strings fire from her scythe. She takes up the pose of a puppeteer at this point. The shield makes the ally look like a shade. [Shade: the strings are glowing red] Cooldown: Once every Two Posts Damage: 89 [Shade: 23 DPS] - Shield Blocks 139
- Ability Two:
Effects: AoE damage; slows enemies hit for one turns[Shade: ranged attack] Appearance: Belladonna raises her scythe, which burns with fire for a second before slicing across the area in front of her, leaving a red line in its path. [Shade: three balls of dark fire shoot along the red line towards the nearest enemy (priority of champions) with the lowest health.] Cooldown: Once every Post Damage: 61 / Balls - 33 Each
- Ability Three:
Effects: AoE damage (lasts an additional turn; Escape; Power up (increased attack speed and critical chance for Two Turns), Ignite (upon touching) for Three Turns Appearance: Belladonna spins through the air, leaving behind a flurry of red energy. The energy falls to the ground and bursts into golden flame from where she started to where she landed. [Shade: As she's spinning, she releases three balls of dark fire spin off of her and towards the nearest enemy with the lowest health (with a priority on champions).] Cooldown: Once every Three Posts Damage: Fire - 43 DPS / Balls - 33 Each - Ultimate:
Effects: Form; Power up, Hides Appearance: Belladonna shifts from beauty to beast in a matter of implosion. She takes form as a black ball of energy with glowing red eyes. When she casts abilities, the energy shapes into a shadow-figure of Belladonna. Cooldown: Lasts 3 Posts; Once every Eight Posts
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Ezoroth Gamemaster
Posts : 266 Join date : 2014-02-01 Age : -7975
| Subject: Re: Belladonna, the Enslaved Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:34 pm | |
| - Kalamity wrote:
- Ability One:
Effects: (Enemy) Damage upon attachment, damage upon break; allows Belladonna to pull the enemy to her, attached enemy takes increased damage from her for 3 seconds, silences enemy once pulled [Shade: damage over time] (Ally) Shield ally [Shade: improved shield]; allows Belladonna to pull herself to the ally Appearance: Two red strings fire from Belladonna's left arm, while two red strings fire from her scythe. She takes up the pose of a puppeteer at this point. The shield makes the ally look like a shade. [Shade: the strings are glowing red] Cooldown: Once every Two Posts Damage: 200 [Shade: 45 DPS] - Shield Blocks 250
- Ability Two:
Effects: AoE damage; slows enemies hit [Shade: ranged attack] Appearance: Belladonna raises her scythe, which burns with fire for a second before slicing across the area in front of her, leaving a red line in its path. [Shade: three balls of dark fire shoot along the red line towards the nearest enemy (priority of champions) with the lowest health.] Cooldown: Once every Post Damage: 248
- Ability Three:
Effects: AoE damage; Escape; Power up, Ignite Appearance: Belladonna spins through the air, leaving behind a flurry of red energy. The energy falls to the ground and bursts into golden flame from where she started to where she landed. [Shade: As she's spinning, she releases three balls of dark fire spin off of her and towards the nearest enemy with the lowest health (with a priority on champions).] Cooldown: Fire Lasts for an Additional Post; Once every Three Posts Damage: Fire - 50 DPS / Balls - 75 Each
For each of your effects, I require you to post how long those last IN the effects area. The ones marked in red. Also for your first ability. Does that do 200 damage upon attachment AND detachment? Or is it a total of 200 damage? Also don't use seconds, please, use posts. For ability three, does the ignite mean even after stepping in the AoE damage, they keep take a bit more damage? I need all of this listed because anybody using this char can level up these effects. | |
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Ezoroth Gamemaster
Posts : 266 Join date : 2014-02-01 Age : -7975
| Subject: Re: Belladonna, the Enslaved Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:05 pm | |
| Lower the damages on all of your abilities, please. A base of 25-50 is good. 'cause I still have to account for how much damage is added from your magic damage ratings. | |
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Ezoroth Gamemaster
Posts : 266 Join date : 2014-02-01 Age : -7975
| Subject: Re: Belladonna, the Enslaved Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:45 pm | |
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